My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

July 2, 2010 “New Dawn”

July 2, 2010   “New Dawn”

Common prides and dignities
Laid bare to the sun

No one else can see
Into our tinted glass house
Still the sun burns through

Our eyes filled with tears
Can’t see through watery veil
Sun shines through the glass

Words become painful
Pain that was not intended
Yellow sun blinding

Two hearts are breaking
Each one for the others sake
Sunlight still shining

Each heart needs its mate
Without it each stands bleeding
Sunshine now dimming

Darkness brings weeping
Tears soften lips for kissing
Sun shines from within

Two loves grow sanguine
Two mated hearts, bleeding love
Sun rises…New Dawn

TLH 7/2/10

Just Say’n

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18 responses

  1. Your vivid imagination leaves me speechless and spellbound every single time! I understood and felt every single word. Another beautiful verse from the heart. Well done Cowboy oxo

    July 1, 2010 at 11:29 pm

    • Thank you for the understanding, and all the kind words. Your comments mean more than you know, Red 🙂

      Just Say’n

      July 2, 2010 at 11:07 pm

  2. beautiful images you words paint..
    love the frank talk..

    July 2, 2010 at 1:39 am

    • Thanks Jingle, for reading…and for everything you do for all of us.

      Just Say’n

      July 2, 2010 at 11:09 pm

  3. we need those new dawns in our relationships…when we see new color and perhaps reminded of an old one…

    July 2, 2010 at 2:41 am

    • Indeed, Brian, I could not agree more…we need to let the sun shine on us so we can see ourselves a little better. Thanks for reading 🙂

      Just Say’n

      July 2, 2010 at 11:36 pm

  4. I enjoyed the roller coaster of emotion from dark to dusk. Nice one.

    July 2, 2010 at 2:46 am

    • I’m very glad you take time to visit, Emmanuel…Thanks Much.

      Just Say’n

      July 2, 2010 at 11:37 pm

  5. i always enjoy your work, this is no exception. Keep your ink to paper.

    July 2, 2010 at 4:07 am

    • My well is filled and I have quill in hand. Thanks so much for the comment.

      Just Say’n

      July 2, 2010 at 11:44 pm

  6. So beautiful!! Amazing job!

    July 2, 2010 at 6:58 am

    • Thanks for your time, and the kind comment.

      Sincerely, Tracy

      July 2, 2010 at 11:38 pm

  7. Congratulations, I am so very proud of you…:) ~ Red

    July 2, 2010 at 11:39 am

    • Aw Shucks…
      Thank You for the nomination, Red…You Rock 😉

      July 2, 2010 at 11:41 pm

  8. What a beautiful story captured in haiku. I would love to hear it read aloud. Perfect!

    July 3, 2010 at 8:32 am

  9. Janessa

    I relate to this so much….i love how you capture your heart on paper.

    July 4, 2010 at 6:50 am

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