My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

July 25, 2010


It’s it that does it for her.
It’s the it that makes her heart purr.
Sometimes she’s demure as she looks for the cure.
When she sees it she wants it,
she needs it,
her burning heart bleeds it…
this it that does her so well.
It’s not all that hard to tell
what she’s thinking…just look in her eyes
as she rises to him and sighs;
her lips dripping love as they kiss.
The it that does it is…

Listen to this here:

tlh+1Β  7/24/2010



6 responses

  1. Cool and clever poem. Congrats on your award, Tracy. Cheers and Write On!

    July 25, 2010 at 7:28 am

  2. wow,
    delicate words.
    I admire your sharp senses and the style you carry it out is unbeatable!

    July 25, 2010 at 9:11 am

  3. Very poignant it creates an achy feeling as I read.

    Regards …

    July 25, 2010 at 11:22 am

  4. The image of this poem is etched in my mind…”IT”….really makes me think? Such a wonderful intimate poem Cowboy. Write on πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    July 25, 2010 at 1:21 pm

  5. Janessa

    Wow! Can’t tell you how much I love this and connect with it. “when she sees if she wants it, she needs it” – brilliant! Well done

    July 25, 2010 at 6:17 pm

  6. Homage to “it.” It does it for me!

    July 25, 2010 at 7:21 pm

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