My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

July 30, 2010

“hurt”

if my heart
is this heart
that beats in my breast
I would
I had the power
to tear it from my chest
and toss it to the winds
as far as east is from the west
for as it beats I live
as I live, I die
not a life a hero can save
not a death dying for a grave
but the death of my soul
for the life that I crave
cast it to the clouds
for some blind fool to find
who cannot feel
the pain it left behind
who cannot see
the love scars so unkind
this aching, breaking heart of mine
this griever
this constant deceiver
loveless receiver
eternal believer…

It feels so warm in my slippery hand…

©tlh  7/30/2010

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(photo from the web)

Thanks Red

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14 responses

  1. So very sad, but hope springs eternal and the heart has enormous capacity for regeneration and healing.
    Nicely read Tracy.

    July 30, 2010 at 12:27 am

    • As always, Thanks much, Cindy, for taking your time to read my work…I really love it that you do. This one is indeed dark…I was going for the dramatic gesture here to make this one reach out and grab the reader.

      BIG SMILE 🙂
      Tracy H

      July 30, 2010 at 8:52 pm

  2. This is most probably one of your saddest poems ever Cowboy!! Powerful touching words spoken from the heart…maybe very soon you might want to change the last line to “It feels so warm in the grip of my hand” 🙂 Red x

    July 30, 2010 at 2:16 am

    • The sooner the better in my book, Red 😉 Thank you for always being so kind. Too, thanks for finding the coolest pictures for me…”partner”.

      Love,
      Cowboy

      July 30, 2010 at 8:57 pm

  3. That was powerful. A chill ran through me reading it. The final image is extremely dark and disturbing.

    Well done. Regards…

    July 30, 2010 at 6:32 am

  4. Such emotion and words of pain make the reader want to rush in with a tourniquet and a prayer.

    The occupant of a sinking boat once said to his companion, you bail and I’ll pray. His companion said, I can bail and pray at the same time and so can you!

    The words are very touching and make the reader empathize. The cadence adds drama and tension. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

    July 30, 2010 at 6:54 am

  5. lifeinarecipe

    I cried.

    July 30, 2010 at 7:48 am

  6. Such a lovely poem filled with such deep sadness that is so heartfelt…thanks for sharing your words.

    July 30, 2010 at 7:50 am

  7. Wow…
    brilliant wordplay you’ve used here, Tracy!
    this constant deceiver, Loveless receiver,
    eternal believer — excellent !
    You have so very well described the the sadder part of the heart and the related emotions that come with it…
    How it lives in this constant hope – how it sees this constant light – and how with all of this, it hurts us even further…
    A lovely poem!

    July 30, 2010 at 10:25 am

  8. love your creativity in this…
    very powerful thinking!
    🙂

    July 30, 2010 at 6:29 pm

  9. Tremendous flow of emotions in the poem.. and the poetic imagery created strikes the right chord in the heart… Great words. Loved it.

    July 31, 2010 at 6:16 am

  10. Strong imagery which strikes the right chord in the heart. A painful existence it surely is. Great choice of words and comparisons. Loved reading it.

    July 31, 2010 at 6:49 am

  11. Desiree

    Wow, that’s so powerful.. Great job!

    July 31, 2010 at 7:57 am

  12. This is so powerful and sad. It’s a beautiful portrait of a broken heart.

    August 1, 2010 at 9:07 am

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