My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

July 31, 2010 “a happy post for both Cindys”

Tealights

Two lovers draped in the flickering glow
of two tealights, dimly dancing slow
upon the ebbing walls, across the flowing floor
like fairy gods playing at the shadowed door
the lovers lie in lover’s eye
lost in the fluttering flame
melted and melded
til two lights become same
and brighter still their light
burning jealous green and passion red
each for their love’s loving through the night
two tiny tealights
lighting lover’s love’s way
til fairy gods vanish
and night’s become day

©tlh  7/31/2010

Listen to this here:

(photo from the web)

Thanks, Red

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10 responses

  1. That is, quite truly, pretty writing. I loved it.
    Good sibilance and alliteration.
    Have a super Saturday Tracy.

    July 31, 2010 at 1:48 am

  2. I’m so pleased you liked it, Cindy:) I forgot the dedication and came back to add it, and your comment was posted. This one is for you, Cindy South, and for Cindy North…two of my favorites 🙂

    Tracy H

    July 31, 2010 at 1:58 am

  3. two in one perfect place is great.
    beautiful writing again,
    cheers!
    😉

    July 31, 2010 at 7:12 am

  4. This was so lyrical and visual. Very nicely done.

    July 31, 2010 at 10:22 am

  5. The portrayal’s just so beautiful, I really enjoyed this. Your writing is so versatile and rich in every way. Keep writing Cowboy!!

    July 31, 2010 at 3:01 pm

  6. lifeinarecipe

    You have an amazing knack for giving life to little things. I have dozens of tea lights sitting in a dark closet. Now of course I am going to have to dig them out and light them to see if I can’t spot the fairy gods. If I am considered one of the Cindy’s I thank you kindly for thinking of me.

    July 31, 2010 at 3:39 pm

  7. Lovely metaphor and pleasant read.

    Hope your weekend is sweet, my friend. I always wish you the best.

    Cheers!

    July 31, 2010 at 4:41 pm

  8. green envies and red passions — very lovely!
    “like fairy gods playing at the shadowed door” — sounded musical as I was reading it aloud 😦
    I like the style you’ve employed here…
    Good work here, Tracy.. Kudos 🙂

    July 31, 2010 at 7:20 pm

  9. I love the lilting rhythm in this, Tracy. It’s a lovely piece.

    August 1, 2010 at 1:52 am

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