My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

August 10, 2010 “ten kisses”

“ten kisses”

Covers are warm
in the morning sun,
kiss me.

Walk close by
when the day is begun,
kiss me.

Stop what you’re doing
and step over here,
kiss me.

Close your eyes
as I nibble your ear,
kiss me.

When evening sets
and the breeze is cool,
kiss me.

When I’m lost in you
and staring like a fool,
kiss me.

If the music is soft
on the dance floor,
kiss me.

As I fumble for keys
to unlock the door,
kiss me.

At the end of the day
when all’s done and said,
kiss me.

As I turn out the light
and take you to bed,
kiss me.

I’ll always kiss you back…

©tlh   8/10/2010

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(Image courtesy of artist)

Thank you, Red

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29 responses

  1. Very romantic 🙂

    August 9, 2010 at 11:35 pm

    • Romance is my favorite subject by far 🙂 Thank you, Cindy, for your time and comments. I always wait for your comments.

      August 14, 2010 at 8:52 pm

  2. This reminds me a bit of Romeo and Juliet…The sort of man each woman dreams of in the deepest and most secret reaches of her heart. Very romantic Tracy..I am sure your Lady is one very happy woman:):):)

    August 10, 2010 at 12:26 am

    • Red, thank you for this very kind comment. I always try to write what I feel in a pleasing, romantic manner to be sure to make her happy…so far so good 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:01 pm

  3. SO SWEET!!
    Been there, done that, and I must say, the feeling is great! And the wish lives on forever too.. 🙂
    I thoroughly enjoyed this poem… it brought lovely images, flashbacks, “flashpresents” too!!! 🙂
    Awesome!!!!

    August 10, 2010 at 1:35 am

    • I love your comments, Kavita, they always make me feel like I’ve done well…Thank you. Enjoy those “flashpresents” 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:03 pm

  4. Ilakya Spandhanaa

    How Romantic..!!! I have no doubt your woman is one lucky lady out there..! This is just too beautiful.!!

    August 10, 2010 at 2:43 am

    • Thanks so much, Ilakya. You have brought a big smile to my face. I think I’m the lucky one 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:04 pm

  5. i often wonder to myself is there really such a man out there? your prose makes me realize that such a man does exist, and there is still hope for this world!
    i love the warmth you’ve created, a tender longing that last the whole day through…treating a woman with such passion will surely culminate in a wonderful evening 🙂

    August 10, 2010 at 4:57 am

    • Thank you, Sheri, for giving your time to visit, and for giving more to write such a wonderful comment. Ten kisses will do wonders for anyone 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:08 pm

  6. Your poetry is lovely and so is this piece. I find you reveal the essence of any situation and again with these two people coming together. The small things that add up to the whole. By the end of the piece I feel … envious, frankly.

    Best regards …

    August 10, 2010 at 6:41 am

    • Thanks, Jhannet, your attentive reading and comments mean a lot to me; I respect your input greatly. 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:10 pm

  7. Such a romantic poem…enjoyed reading it.

    August 10, 2010 at 7:46 am

    • Thank you, My Friend. Your comments are always greatly appreciated and respected.

      August 14, 2010 at 9:12 pm

  8. lifeinarecipe

    Very nice poem Tracy but I must say that your words do more to create a pang, than my recipes could ever do.

    You have us romantics hooked and we like it!

    🙂 Cindy

    August 10, 2010 at 8:31 am

    • LOL…Thanks Cindy 🙂 I’m craving peaches and blueberries 😉

      August 14, 2010 at 9:13 pm

  9. my goodness,
    u r still sweating,

    cool off,
    stand under a big fan,
    smiles!

    August 10, 2010 at 12:19 pm

    • Ji, your comment made me smile…:):):) x

      August 10, 2010 at 1:29 pm

    • Ha! Thanks, Jingle 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:15 pm

  10. I agree with the general consensus here… romantic! And I love how this didn’t have to be sickly sweet in order to be romantic. 🙂

    August 10, 2010 at 3:22 pm

    • Thank you, Tony. I was indeed trying to be romantic in the everyday moments, thanks for noticing, My Friend 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:18 pm

  11. loved this..the sentiment it so simple and yet so very well written..cheers Pete

    August 11, 2010 at 3:13 am

    • Thank you, Pete, your comments are very welcome and wanted by this poet 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:21 pm

  12. This is just delicious, and so romantic. Romance is definitely in the air today.

    August 11, 2010 at 5:56 am

    • Thank you, Patti. I love it when you come by and read. I’m very glad you like my work 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:22 pm

  13. Wonderfully romantic….kiss me. 😉

    August 11, 2010 at 2:39 pm

    • LOL…I’m gonna have to come up with a romantic 160 just for you 🙂 Thanks for reading and commenting! Mwah!!! LOL

      August 14, 2010 at 9:24 pm

  14. Oh, what a romantic your are, Tracy. Lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it.

    August 12, 2010 at 6:23 am

    • Thank YOU, Jamie, I’m very happy you like it 🙂

      August 14, 2010 at 9:26 pm

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