My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

August 14, 2010 “secret love”

“secret love”

when my love sees me
from across a room standing
she senses my eyes

what my love senses
is from behind these green eyes
my desire for her

when my love glances
in the twinkling of her eye
her deepest desire

there is no distance
though it were a thousand miles
our two hearts are one

in a crowded room
or somewhere among the clouds
in a tealight flame

her mind and my mind
bound by a lover’s aching
a white-hot passion

we find each other
without a kiss or a touch
madly we make love

Β©tlhΒ Β  8/14/2010

Listen to this here:

(Image courtesy of artist)

Thank You, Red


19 responses

  1. *wistful sigh* Those were the days …

    August 14, 2010 at 12:07 am

    • These are still the days πŸ™‚ My Friend πŸ™‚

      August 15, 2010 at 10:28 pm

  2. Ah yes, this poem says that it is a love that was always meant to be. Nice. πŸ™‚

    August 14, 2010 at 4:31 am

    • Truer words…
      Thanks, Tony πŸ™‚

      August 15, 2010 at 10:29 pm

  3. young at heart,
    magical sentiments…

    August 14, 2010 at 7:22 am

    • Thank You, Jingle…You Rock!

      August 15, 2010 at 10:29 pm

  4. true love… hard to find… harder to hold on to! beautiful poem, flow’s very nice!

    August 14, 2010 at 11:42 am

    • True and passionate flow easily…Thank you for the kind comment. I enjoy your visits πŸ™‚

      August 15, 2010 at 10:31 pm

  5. I closed my eyes listening to you reading this….and was mesmerized…you have a way of making the reader actually feel and visualize the passion….which this one oozes of!!! Phewwww…good one Cowboy x

    August 14, 2010 at 2:36 pm

    • Thanks for giving me your time, Red…it means a lot that you took the time to enjoy the adventure πŸ™‚

      August 15, 2010 at 10:34 pm

  6. lifeinarecipe

    Thanks to this poem your secret is out!

    True love knows no boundaries of time or distance. With your poem you have shown us that no words need be spoken between matched souls.

    I liked it very much..thank you for sharing and have a wonderful Sunday!

    August 14, 2010 at 8:14 pm

    • Cindy πŸ™‚ You are just so kind to me…Thank You, and Thanks for enjoying my work…you bring a smile to my face every time. πŸ™‚

      August 15, 2010 at 10:36 pm

  7. woah..great poem.
    What inspired you?

    You have a way with words that can make your readers imagine the delights of true love and the passion basking in its light.


    August 15, 2010 at 5:41 am

    • My inspiration comes from the Love Of My Life…even when she is far away our passion for each other does not wane. Thank you very much for giving me your time in reading and making the kind comment.

      August 15, 2010 at 10:39 pm


    Poets Rally Week 26 awards,
    5 of them,

    August 15, 2010 at 11:50 am

    • πŸ™‚ Thanks, Jingle πŸ™‚

      August 15, 2010 at 10:40 pm

  9. Nice! Just dripping with passion like an emotional cinnamon roll.

    August 16, 2010 at 3:49 am

    • MMMMM! I like this visual! Thank you, Jamie. I tried to be as romantic as I could without getting “too romantic” read erotic πŸ™‚

      August 16, 2010 at 9:18 pm

  10. laila

    breath taken and so true ,unfortunally it never last long ,just some years ,because this kind of love is like a fairy tail,its beautifull written though and i really hope it will last ,as in my experience it never does πŸ˜‰
    thank you for sharing πŸ˜‰
    laila in amsterdam holland

    September 14, 2011 at 10:35 pm

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