My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

August 31, 2010 “loveshine”


shifting shapes
towering forms
constant flux
portending storms
stand amazed
darkening shrouds
mingling mist
climbing clouds
roiling shadows
boiling blue
beaming sun
mortal view
heavenly splendors
stormy pale
love shining
silvery veil

©tlh   8/31/2010
(Photo by tlh)


13 responses

  1. Quite another fine poem of the power of love…excellent imagery.

    August 30, 2010 at 9:20 pm

    • Thank you, Sir. I find Love poetry to be my favorite these days; I’m very glad you liked this one. 🙂

      September 1, 2010 at 12:23 am

  2. I loved this 🙂

    August 30, 2010 at 10:36 pm

    • Thank you, Cindy. You have made me Smile Big 🙂

      September 1, 2010 at 12:24 am

  3. I loved the fishbone structure!!! How clever of you, Tracy.. wow!!!

    And yes, Love first peeps, then shines through all those grey clouds, heavy shrouds, dark mountains..all of it!

    Love ROCKS!!!

    August 31, 2010 at 11:24 am

    • Thank you, My Friend 🙂 Love does indeed ROCK!!!

      September 1, 2010 at 12:11 am

  4. Oh yes, I see what you’ve done here, you clever thing! Love how this just flows from beginning to end without pausing for breath, and the singular action words keep that momentum going. Very nice! 🙂

    August 31, 2010 at 3:05 pm

    • Thanks for the fine observation and the kind comment…they are very much appreciated, Tony 🙂

      September 1, 2010 at 12:10 am

  5. I agree also…The Power of Love :)…You’re still Mr Romance in my book 🙂 ~ Red x

    September 1, 2010 at 12:40 am

    • Aw Shucks, Red 🙂 I’m a Hopeless Romantic I guess 😉

      September 1, 2010 at 12:42 am

  6. amazing words.

    September 1, 2010 at 8:05 am

    • 😉 Thanks, Jingle…you know what I think….YOU ROCK !! LOL 🙂

      September 2, 2010 at 10:10 pm

  7. lifeinarecipe

    I love the rhythm and imagery of this poem. Another amazing piece of work here!

    September 1, 2010 at 9:32 pm

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