My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

September 4, 2010 “Will you?”

“Will you?”

Will you will you

to be mine,

to be true,

will you

to see me through

my quiet,

my loud,

my humility,

my proud,

my joy,

my sad,

will you

to see

my goodness

my bad

my triumph

my tragedy

my envy

my lust

my insecurity

my trust

my gods

my demons,

my love…?

My Love,

will you,

will you

love me?

©tlh 9/4/2010

Listen to this here:

(Image courtesy of the artist)

Thanks, Red


20 responses

  1. Tracy, the woman at the end of all of this wonderful warm glow of love, indeed is a very lucky Lady…you have a big heart and in my eyes…how could she not??? ~ Great poem Cowboy xx

    September 3, 2010 at 11:23 pm

    • I’m a Southern Boy, and she’s a Southern Belle…I’m the lucky one 🙂

      September 4, 2010 at 12:19 am

  2. Ooh, what a lucky woman!

    September 4, 2010 at 1:08 am

  3. For better or for worse. That’s what this says to me. Absolutely true. Another great read, Tracy. 🙂

    September 4, 2010 at 4:49 am

    • Exactly, My Friend…you read it astutely. Thank You 🙂

      September 4, 2010 at 1:23 pm

  4. wow,
    love it,
    very short but informative.

    September 4, 2010 at 6:54 am

  5. A very lovely poem…reminded me of a wedding vow…well done!

    September 4, 2010 at 7:08 am

    • Thank you 🙂 … it was indeed meant as a vow of sorts.

      September 4, 2010 at 1:20 pm

  6. I love the idea behind this. interesting take and nice.

    Cheers, friend.

    September 4, 2010 at 12:58 pm

    • Thank you, Emmanuel 🙂 I’m very glad to see you here…Cheers to you, My Friend

      September 4, 2010 at 1:15 pm

  7. Somebody is a lucky lady … Lovely poem with lovely sentiment. You are a dear fellow, Tracy.

    Speaking of which…
    Multiple peer awards for you here –

    September 4, 2010 at 6:07 pm

    • You are sweet, My Friend…Thank you. 🙂

      September 5, 2010 at 11:34 am

  8. Lovely, lovely, lovely! And it really does sound like a wedding vow. I know your lady must read these wonderful poems. I hope she reads the comments too. We all think she is a lucky woman.

    September 5, 2010 at 10:02 am


      September 5, 2010 at 11:43 am

  9. OMG…. An a H-U-G-E fan of TWILIGHT SAGA, the image only won my hart even b4 reading your piece but when i read it i just couldn’t stop myself from reading it again n again…. it like Bella asking Edward …. coz you mentioned humanity, Edward isn’t human… for me he is humane. the list line almost took my breath…. its just beautiful…. I imagined whole picture…
    ThankQ so so much for sharing it.

    September 5, 2010 at 2:47 pm

    • I’m thrilled you enjoyed this one…it’s lines mean a lot to me. Please come back again 🙂
      btw…I just watched Eclipse last night…Great Love story 🙂

      September 6, 2010 at 12:55 am

  10. Oh my!! Is there anything left to be said?! It’s all laid out in front of her.. I wishes she reads it soon, and nods 🙂

    Beautifully written, Tracy
    The longing is obvious and so real!!!

    September 7, 2010 at 2:28 am

  11. Obviously, we women would all love for this to be directed at us.

    twilight left me with quite a different impression, though. I wrote about it here.

    Could you tell me how you embedded the audio on this? I really like the voice going with this as I read.


    September 7, 2010 at 3:21 am

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