My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

lay him on his pyre

kindled with tear stained pages

purge his tortured soul

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10 responses

  1. Very interesting poem Tracy…the emotion seemed different from some of your other poems.

    September 5, 2010 at 12:40 pm

    • Indeed…it feels like one of Tennyson’s 600 just before the charge; almost despair, but not quite, sad nonetheless. Thanks much for the comment.

      September 5, 2010 at 5:40 pm

  2. vivid 😉

    September 5, 2010 at 2:48 pm

  3. Janessa

    WOW! That’s great…seriously…3 lines that just made my heart skip a beat. Man…i feel it Tracy.

    September 5, 2010 at 4:35 pm

    • Thanks, Janessa. Glad you read with feeling. 🙂

      September 5, 2010 at 5:43 pm

  4. animated and cute!
    🙂

    September 5, 2010 at 5:04 pm

  5. great read. short yet powerful. thanks!

    September 6, 2010 at 3:53 am

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