My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

September 20, 2010 “evening, stars, and moon”

For Poetry Potluck

“evening, stars, and moon”


evening bids adieu to the singular sun

sinking into his blazing bed

and gives a welcoming hello nod

to a million stars overhead

winking, blinking, twinkling stars

in the indigo sea overhead


evening basks in diamond light

sparkling in the deeping skies

he lavishly flaunts his sable robe

before those adoring eyes

shimmering, glimmering luminaries

with jealously enamored eyes


but evening ebbs from his coveted stage

to play a second-fiddle tune

to his million stars, those adoring eyes

paling in the glow of the moon

that gloriously glamorous, alluringly amorous

night’s divine diva…the moon

©tlh 9/20/2010

Listen to this here:

Photo by tlh…taken this evening

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50 responses

  1. well prepared art,
    thoughtfully done!

    love starts, moon, and light.

    September 19, 2010 at 9:17 pm

  2. signed .............bkm

    Tracy, yes it is the Divine Diva…she is pulls at the heart and says write…you have captured her here….bkm

    September 19, 2010 at 9:17 pm

    • Thank you…I’m very glad you like the piece 🙂

      September 24, 2010 at 4:41 pm

  3. I totally agree, the Master of Romance has created her to perfection here. Thanks for linking and your support Tracy ~ Red xx

    September 19, 2010 at 9:46 pm

    • 🙂 Thank you for the kind comments. It’s a pleasure to be a part of Potluck. 🙂

      September 24, 2010 at 4:40 pm

  4. I just love the rich words you’ve used. Very descriptive and I just love the way it sounds.

    Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/08/07/watching/

    September 19, 2010 at 10:12 pm

    • Thank you very much for the visit, and for your time in reading and commenting.

      September 24, 2010 at 4:39 pm

  5. Wow! Wonderful words~~~ *.* I can see glitter and sparks all over here, thank for sharing =3

    September 19, 2010 at 11:50 pm

    • Thank you, and thanks for visiting 🙂

      September 24, 2010 at 4:37 pm

  6. wow!

    September 20, 2010 at 9:24 am

  7. Aaahh.. the night. Gives me some respite from the craziness of daytime. I really appreciate that you recorded yourself reciting it and uploaded that. Brings a whole other dimension. Kudos. Like your blog, hope to be back!

    Warmest Salad,

    Luke

    September 20, 2010 at 9:51 am

    • Thank you, Sir, for taking the time to read AND listen, I’m very pleased you enjoyed your visit. I hope to see you again 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 8:44 pm

  8. I love the night sky and I love the moon and this poem is a gorgeous tribute to the beauty of both!

    September 20, 2010 at 10:00 am

    • Oh, Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 8:43 pm

  9. Tracy

    I just got chills! Between the poem, your photo, your reading, sable robes and the Divine Diva…I’m in awe! Wonderful!

    You use so many words that feel amazing when spoken out loud!

    September 20, 2010 at 10:04 am

    • Thank you, Annie. I’m very glad that my partner in crime likes my work 😉 lol Ya dig?

      September 23, 2010 at 8:42 pm

  10. Night’s divine diva: a scintillating phrase to end a lovely poem.

    September 20, 2010 at 10:24 am

    • Thank you, Ma’am, for your time in reading, and for the kind comment 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 8:40 pm

  11. Love the visual painting you made with your words…you created a beautiful scene…and a peaceful mood.

    September 20, 2010 at 11:11 am

    • Thanks, Charles…I actually wrote a poem without the word “love” in it 🙂 I feel like I cheated LOL

      September 23, 2010 at 8:22 pm

  12. night’s divine diva – that’s what she is – and i fall for her!
    in german language the moon is male and the earth is female
    but i love it much more to think of the moon as female

    September 20, 2010 at 1:09 pm

    • 🙂 Ya know, I just always thought of the sun as male, but never considered the moon. I agree with you, Claudia…the moon is better suited to be female. Thank you for your visit, and for the kind comment too.

      September 23, 2010 at 8:09 pm

  13. some wonderful comparisons and descriptions here! 🙂 loved it..

    My Potluck

    September 20, 2010 at 1:19 pm

    • Thank you very much, I’m glad you enjoyed 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 8:02 pm

  14. “gloriously glamorous, alluringly amorous” … poem …

    Nice work, Tracy. And you even used the theme. The photo is stunning. Altogether lovely. Thank you!

    September 20, 2010 at 2:09 pm

    • Thank you, Jamie 🙂 You, My Dear, are the Gloriously Glamorous one. 😉

      September 23, 2010 at 7:57 pm

  15. Your lines reminded me of the ebb and flow of the tides. Well written

    September 20, 2010 at 3:21 pm

    • Thank you, Adam. Your comments are always appreciated 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 7:55 pm

  16. Nice, Tracy. I love the “second fiddle tune” line. And your picture is amazing.

    September 20, 2010 at 4:10 pm

    • 🙂 Thanks, Patti…I kinda favored that same line…thinking myself clever. lol 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 7:54 pm

  17. Beautiful poem!!

    loveNlight
    Gabi

    September 20, 2010 at 5:37 pm

    • Thank you, Gabi 🙂 It’s a pleasure to have you visit and comment. I hope you will return soon 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 7:46 pm

  18. A.B. Thomas

    The richness of the images that spring from the words are utterly fantastic to absorb – thanks!

    September 20, 2010 at 9:45 pm

    • Thank you 🙂 I appreciate your time in reading, and also in commenting so kindly. 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 7:44 pm

  19. “he lavishly flaunts his sable robe”

    ..what honor, magic and dignity you’ve bestowed upon the night and it’s protagonist.

    WOnderfully spun.

    September 20, 2010 at 10:13 pm

    • Thank you, my friend 🙂 and thanks for giving your time to come and read for a while…I’m very pleased you did.

      September 23, 2010 at 7:35 pm

  20. Oooohhh… well said, Tracy! The moon, once risen, totally steals the show!! And the little shiny, glittery stars can stare with envy.. 🙂 They don’t realize how special they are though!!

    A charming piece, T… thank you for linking it to poetry potluck.. it’s PERFECT!!! 😀 Yaaayyy
    YOU ROCK!!!

    September 20, 2010 at 10:17 pm

    • K…this is why you are one of my very faves…well, that, and the whole Floyd thing 🙂 You are “THE ROCKER!”

      September 23, 2010 at 7:33 pm

  21. these are haunting words to honor the night’s divine diva… truly a masterpiece! *applause*

    September 20, 2010 at 10:33 pm

    • Thank you very much…I’m tickled Pink that you enjoyed the poem 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 7:10 pm

  22. The last verse is the best.
    Great job with this

    September 21, 2010 at 7:26 am

    • Thank you so much for frequenting my blog, it’s a pleasure to have talent such as you commenting. I’m very happy you liked this piece.

      September 23, 2010 at 7:07 pm

  23. Lovely and so visual. I loved the line:

    “evening basks in diamond light”

    Regards…

    September 21, 2010 at 10:33 am

    • 🙂 I’m happy you like it, Jhannet 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 7:04 pm

  24. Happy Wednesday, Thanks for linking up with poetry potluck,
    link more if you wish!

    cheers!

    September 21, 2010 at 1:29 pm

  25. Tuesday today, sorry for my mistake!
    have fun!

    September 21, 2010 at 2:04 pm

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