My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

September 21, 2010 “if I wrote”

I asked, “what should I write?” she said, “write about how much you love me…”

“if I wrote”


if I wrote how I desire you

truly how I desire you

how I dream of your touch

how I taste your kisses

though our lips have never met

how I feel your body tremble

in the moment of deepest passion

if I penned how it feels

to see my reflection in your sated eyes

though only in a dream

if I wrote the feel of your hand in mine

of your small fingers clasped in mine

as we walk along a shore

or on some sunlit path

if I scribbled out some lines

about the glorious fullness

in the core of my soul

or how the words

I Love You”

sound in my ears…

if I put pen to paper and wrote this

the pen would cry out

and the paper would weep

for the unwritable,

uncontainable,

unexplainable

joy

of

LOVE.

©tlh 9/21/2010

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19 responses

  1. Another excellent romantic love poem filled with just beautiufl lines….so very nicely said Tracy…a real joy to read.

    September 21, 2010 at 12:57 pm

    • Thanks, Charles, I’m pleased that you like these love poems…it seems they are what I do best, or at least, most often 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 7:04 pm

  2. that super sweet.

    September 21, 2010 at 2:03 pm

  3. wow tracy – this is just full of sensual desire, love, romance and passion!

    September 21, 2010 at 3:08 pm

    • Coming from such a fine love poet as yourself, Claudia…that is a high compliment for sure. Thank You 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 6:56 pm

  4. Sir, that’s marvellous! I think you may have indeed written the unwritable. Like Claudia said, all the hallmarks of love are right there. 🙂

    September 21, 2010 at 6:29 pm

    • You, Sir, are a friend, and a kind one…Thank You indeed!

      September 23, 2010 at 6:55 pm

  5. made my heart stop, just suspended.

    September 21, 2010 at 7:45 pm

    • Then you read it with feeling, and that’s a wonderful compliment…Thank You 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 6:53 pm

  6. Ah, Tracy. Your heart bleeds through your words, and mine bleeds in response.

    September 22, 2010 at 10:35 am

    • Patti…our hearts are bleeding love, and I’m so glad you’re with me, my friend.

      September 23, 2010 at 6:51 pm

  7. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/4ever-friends-thursday-poets-rally-week-29/

    welcome to week 29….
    friendship award 4 u.

    September 22, 2010 at 7:03 pm

  8. Bravo, Tracy. Pure delight! I’m in love with your love poem.

    Happy Rally …

    September 22, 2010 at 8:48 pm

    • Thank you , Jamie…love to you for loving my love poem 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 6:43 pm

  9. To me this is simply THE best poem you have ever written. I love coming here, your poetry and friendship is one of my most precious possessions. ~ Red.

    September 23, 2010 at 2:05 am

    • 🙂 Thanks, Red…I’m sure you know how much you mean to me as well; I’m very glad the you liked this piece 🙂

      September 23, 2010 at 5:56 pm

  10. This is just great! It certainly has a huge romantic feeling.
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    September 23, 2010 at 11:20 pm

    • Thank you for coming to visit again, I’m glad you like the poem 🙂

      September 24, 2010 at 4:43 pm

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