My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

September 24, 2010 “night birds”

“night birds”


I kissed my Love this morning

in golden light’s first dawning,

among the fading shadows

as night bird’s songs were wanning

and sunbeams came a fawning.


My Love kissed me at mid-day,

high noon’s sun brightly glowing

under the shading oak tree,

with gentle breezes blowing;

the tide of passions flowing.


Two Lovers in the evening,

embracing ‘neath starlit skies;

complete in each other’s arms,

hushing passion’s heated cries…

night birds answer Lover’s sighs.


©tlh 9/24/2010

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17 responses

  1. You made the difference between mere words and the language of love stand out so much..sigh 🙂 You’re such a damn good poet Mr Romance!!! ~ Red x

    September 24, 2010 at 12:45 am

    • This is a first, Red; I’ve never been called a damned good poet on here before, but I’m damned proud you think so…Ms Romance 🙂

      September 24, 2010 at 5:12 pm

  2. This is great.
    The words fit together and make these smooth flowing lines.
    nice one

    September 24, 2010 at 1:01 am

    • Thank you, Sir; I’m very pleased to know you enjoyed. And, Thanks for visiting 🙂

      September 24, 2010 at 5:08 pm

  3. Flows gently as love flows … Well done, Tracy. Thank you for another good one …
    🙂

    Happy Rally days …

    September 24, 2010 at 2:16 am

    • You make me beam, Jamie 🙂 Thank you!

      September 24, 2010 at 5:07 pm

  4. Seriously, what they said. The ebb and flow of lovers’… well, love, is beautifully expressed here, Tracy. 🙂

    September 24, 2010 at 9:19 am

    • Thank you, Tony…I love Love poetry, but should I write something else? Are folks bored with the sappy love stuff?

      September 24, 2010 at 5:06 pm

      • Never ever 🙂

        September 24, 2010 at 5:08 pm

      • I’m with Amanda. No way am I sick of it! 🙂

        September 25, 2010 at 8:29 am

  5. now I miss my wife even more..beautiful writing Tracy.

    September 24, 2010 at 9:55 am

    • I’m glad for her then, and a little sorry for you, my friend…I know she surely misses you.

      September 24, 2010 at 5:03 pm

  6. A very fine flow to the poem Tracy…from dawn to dust a gentle story of love.

    September 24, 2010 at 12:25 pm

  7. Thanks, Charles…thanks for noticing the flow; I worked at that to keep to the 7 beats per line.

    September 24, 2010 at 5:02 pm

  8. There is a wonderful flow to this, love following the sun and moon though the day. Beautiful, my friend.

    September 25, 2010 at 6:06 pm

    • Thank you, my lovely friend.

      September 25, 2010 at 9:33 pm

  9. very nice flow and i loved that last line. simply beautiful!

    September 26, 2010 at 1:01 pm

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