My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

September 25, 2010 “tealight dancer”

“tealight dancer”


fluttering shadows

mixing with dancing red

and orange shapes

on my ceiling

mesmerizing

my scintillated mind

with visions of her

pirouetting body

spinning through my head

in the sensual glow

of the tealight by my bed


©tlh 9/25/2010

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(Photo by tlh)

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14 responses

  1. i really like this one

    September 25, 2010 at 4:41 am

    • Thank you…I’m very glad you enjoyed it.

      September 25, 2010 at 4:55 pm

  2. ah – now is the time for candles again – wonderful warm poem – so let her dance on in your mind..

    September 25, 2010 at 6:59 am

    • Oh Claudia, I assure you she will dance on 🙂
      Thanks for the comment, my friend.

      September 25, 2010 at 5:00 pm

  3. Yes, another great read. And now please excuse me while I go set up some candles for wifey. Boy, will she be surprised! 😛

    September 25, 2010 at 8:31 am

    • Indeed, Tony…let her relax in the soft flickering glow of candlelight…you will not be disappointed 😉

      September 25, 2010 at 5:03 pm

  4. Candlelight sparks so many warm images…this one of yours is particularly lovely…a warm beautiful image.

    September 25, 2010 at 11:36 am

    • Thanks much, Charles. I burn a tealight for a while every night for this very reason.

      September 25, 2010 at 5:04 pm

  5. Enjoying your work . . . good flow and good tone . . . keep it up 🙂

    September 25, 2010 at 11:48 am

    • Thank you for your time in visiting and reading, and also for the kind comment. 🙂

      September 25, 2010 at 5:06 pm

  6. Tracy, I can just picture this scene: tea light, dancing shadows on the ceiling, your reverie with her dancing in your heart, and oh, yeah,the music I know was playing softly in the background. It’s a beautiful sight.

    September 25, 2010 at 6:00 pm

    • 🙂 Thank you, Patti. I’m glad you came by today to read, or listen to, another sappy 😉 Love poem. Thanks for giving me your time.

      September 25, 2010 at 9:28 pm

  7. I could put myself in the writer’s place and see the dancing shapes and daydream. Glorious!

    September 26, 2010 at 10:57 am

  8. love it!

    September 26, 2010 at 10:55 pm

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