My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

October 20, 2010 “all by myself”

For One Shot Wednesday

 

“all by myself”

*

everyday time spent

too much in a misty cloud

in a cool vapor

dreaming of oneness

a single face in a crowd

unable to fly

dying to stand out

to be worthy of my wings

dying to take flight

falling from the cloud

sweet hope eternally springs

I can learn to fly

alone from this cloud

into a far distant night

all by myself

*

 

©tlh 10/20/10

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15 responses

  1. Wow Cowboy, seems we both wrote poems about flying…love the line “falling from the cloud”. Beautiful words and images evoked. xx

    October 19, 2010 at 10:04 pm

  2. signed .............bkm

    the strength we find in ourself gives that set of wings that help us soar..you convey that inner strength here….bkm

    did not your name linked at One Shot..I looked for it….

    October 20, 2010 at 9:56 pm

    • Thanks for the kind comment 🙂 And, thanks for reminding me about One Shot…I forgot to sign in LOL 🙂

      October 20, 2010 at 10:21 pm

  3. Beautifully said.. the way one has to strive to fly… out to the distant stars…
    thanks for sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/

    October 20, 2010 at 11:56 pm

  4. I thought this bit was awesome:

    “I can learn to fly

    alone from this cloud

    into a far distant night

    all by myself”

    Nice one.

    October 21, 2010 at 2:13 pm

  5. I think flying is the natural state of spirits.

    Lovely poem, Tracy.

    Hey, I like all the pumpkins in your header. Cheerful. And the nice new photo of you.

    Fine post, Tracy. Happy days …

    October 21, 2010 at 10:40 pm

  6. Lovely as always. Your words always strike a cord. Best wishes…

    D

    P.S. The new picture is great.

    October 22, 2010 at 3:48 pm

  7. well put,
    all by oneself is not bad at all…

    October 23, 2010 at 8:42 am

  8. keep writing,
    welcome to poets rally any time.
    have a fabulous day!

    cheers!

    October 23, 2010 at 8:42 am

  9. A wonderful visual problem to have…very good poem Tracy.

    October 24, 2010 at 5:17 pm

  10. This is moving, Tracy. These words are brimming with feelings and experiences that I, like many others I’m sure, have gone through. Oneness seems so ridiculously unattainable to me at times. 🙂

    October 26, 2010 at 4:31 pm

  11. The desire and the imagery is almost dreamlike! So full of feeling….
    It’s almost spiritual actually!

    The state of blissful existence… just what we need in this fast paced survival mode!

    November 6, 2010 at 8:08 pm

  12. got your message,
    will let know this coming Wednesday…
    Thanks for the superb support all the wal.
    Happy writing.
    you write well.
    best wishes.

    November 7, 2010 at 1:05 pm

    • Thanks, Ji, for your understanding and kindness. I hope the others will understand as well.

      November 7, 2010 at 5:52 pm

  13. Happy Sunday!
    you deserve a break.

    November 7, 2010 at 6:56 pm

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