My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

December 8, 2010 “frozen”

“frozen”

*

 

the sky is frozen

so is the wintery air

the snow sticks it to the frozen ground

until it’s hard to breathe

the crystalline atmosphere

claws its way into my lungs

begrudgingly imparting life

to my icy veins

ignoring the gelid stains

the desolation pains

of the cold-black aloneness

that is my frozen heart

 

©tlh 12/8/2010

 

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9 responses

  1. You remind me of those cold winter days in the midwest….and relating to a broken heart is a fine touch to the poem…well done.

    December 8, 2010 at 9:52 am

  2. Wonderful Tracy!

    December 8, 2010 at 11:37 am

  3. This one was dark and icy as well. Excellently done.

    Take care … D.

    December 8, 2010 at 6:05 pm

  4. Jingle

    very beautiful and dark..
    well done.
    keep writing…

    December 16, 2010 at 8:01 am

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  6. Beautiful and deep!!

    December 24, 2010 at 12:40 am

  7. Icy, chilly and lovely 🙂

    December 24, 2010 at 12:38 pm

  8. sigh..the frozen cold heart…deep and thought provoking..

    December 26, 2010 at 7:40 am

  9. This is very heart wrenching! I love it

    December 26, 2010 at 12:07 pm

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