My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

January 20, 2011 “unwanted”



where do they go

the dregs

the loveless


when hopeless truth

is all they know

when they live at the bottom of a glass

a ditch

or the desolate grave of their own despair





where do they go…

the unwanted

to find peace

where do we go


©tlh 1/20/11



5 responses

  1. Sam373

    This is a question unanswered by most.

    January 20, 2011 at 4:15 am

  2. Indeed a fine question to answer…such despair seems to result in some of the crime we see in society.

    January 20, 2011 at 9:47 am

  3. This is just so sad and evoked deep feelings within Tracy! Alone in the stillness of eternal truth…or is it? oxo

    January 20, 2011 at 10:48 pm

  4. Wow, this is so powerful, Tracy. I’m glad to see you turn your talents to a bit of social commentary. You do it so effectively, and make us all pause and reflect for a moment. I’m betting that none of your readers will walk past the next invisible, and not see.

    January 21, 2011 at 8:57 am

  5. Very nice Tracy…the ending really brings it all home…we all experience despair at some point in our life…and even if we are physically destitute we can be emotionally….well done…bkm

    January 21, 2011 at 6:42 pm

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