one heart missed a beat
in silent syncopation
love’s timing lost
This entry was posted on January 22, 2011 by tracyhsays. It was filed under Emotions, Life, Personal, Poetry and was tagged with Haiku, Love, Poem.
So sad for so few lines..but captures a far more complex emotion.
January 23, 2011 at 9:26 am
Thank you for getting it, Charles 🙂
January 23, 2011 at 10:28 am
It’s odd, but when I began to write a comment, the phrase that entered my mine was “… speak of the pompitus of love.”
January 23, 2011 at 10:14 am
Patti 🙂 you have brought back some vivid memories of my younger years…one of my very favorite bands, second only to Pink Floyd. Indeed, love can make one look like a real “Space Cowboy (read Cadet)” sometimes. Thanks for the smiles…I needed them 🙂 🙂
January 23, 2011 at 10:33 am
I can’t help but feel that so much remains unsaid behind those words, so in that regard I think this poem is perfectly formed. I think I need a hug now…
January 24, 2011 at 6:08 am
January 26, 2011 at 11:11 pm
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