My Irritations, Aggravations and Inspirations

March 19, 2011 “silence”

March 19, 2011 ” silence”

balanced on a precipice
above the blazing black of a world
that was mine

staring over the brink
into desolate, destructive silence
without a sound

my mind is visions and remembrances
vivid and obscure as looking into the sun
or a fire

a momentary blindness
yet still seeing
spinning, swirling

irresistible force draws me to my knees
before a wingless angel

reaching, I search for solid ground
overthrown by a lesser god
without words

into nothingness tumbling
tumbling weightless

through blazing black
blacker and blacker

wondering why, why
wondering why

tlh 3/19/11


4 responses

  1. A bit of a surreal feel to these lines.

    March 20, 2011 at 11:44 am

  2. I feel the silence now.
    well penned.

    keep it up.

    March 20, 2011 at 7:58 pm

  3. This made me feel such a sense of solitude. Well penned as usual.

    Regards … D.

    March 26, 2011 at 1:38 pm

  4. Janessa

    Wow… this.

    April 4, 2011 at 4:05 pm

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